Hope this is in the right place. I'll be filling out the survey presently as well, but I wanted to mention something that I think might help in communicating the info in the rulebook to readers (rather than suggestions regarding content).
With the spell format portions of the gift section, it may be helpful to include a brief example of each in action after the mechanics are detailed.
Ex: Thoth and Isis are having a debate, but Isis keeps interrupting. Thoth says "Isis: Bestow warning: Do not speak" if Isis then speak before Thoth lifts this condition Thoth may say "Bestow one Bind Tongue by Law against Isis." Unless Isis has some way to resist a Bind effect or a Law effect she is unable to move her tongue until Thoth lifts the condition. (not sure the rules specify how long the judge thing lasts - but that's a separate thing).
I think that kind of thing could be particularly helpful for folks with a more limited larp background who haven't seen these sorts of calls function in practice.
Overall, very impressive work, looking forward to potentially casting with y'all.